Great!
You've inspired me. I would have used triplets instead of eighth and quarter note rhythms on the ascending stuff to mix it up (gosh, what are the odds anyone will know what I'm talking about?) Then again, I love mixing triplet and duple meter, and its not the easiest thing to groove to.
Let me start over. I love the sonorities you chose for this piece, I love how the mood changes yet the song maintains unity. I love the game and all its music as is, but there are a lot of crappy remixes out there. This is not one of them.
Keep it up!